Updated August 27, 2026 · 7 min read · Written by ProposalAI
WordPress Proposal Example (WooCommerce Checkout Bug)
A store owner with a broken checkout does not need a theme upsell. They need a staging-first diagnosis and a question about the payment plugin.
Example job situation
A shop using WooCommerce and a purchased theme: customers can add to cart, but some cards fail on the checkout page after a plugin update. They asked applicants not to recommend a full theme rebuild. They want someone who will use staging.
Weak / generic proposal
I am a WordPress expert. I can redesign your whole store, speed it up, do SEO, and convert it to a custom theme. I have done 100+ WordPress sites. I can start today and I will make your store high-converting.
Why this is weak
- It proposes a rebuild they forbade.
- “High-converting” is an empty claim for a payment error.
- It never mentions staging or the plugin update.
Improved proposal
Hi — I would not rebuild the theme. I would copy the site to staging, roll the checkout-related plugins back and forward to isolate which update broke card payments, and only then patch or replace that plugin. I did this after a gateway update on a Woo store that failed only for saved cards: the live theme was fine; the conflict was between the wallet plugin and the new checkout block. First hour on staging was reproducing with a test card, not editing templates. Are you on the block-based checkout or shortcode checkout? And do you have a staging copy already, or should that be milestone one?
Why this is stronger
- It obeys “no rebuild.”
- The first hour is reproduction, which is what you want on a payments bug.
- It asks the checkout stack question that changes the fix.
Personalization points
- Name WooCommerce only if they use it; some “WordPress shop” posts are Easy Digital Downloads.
- Do not offer SEO packages in a checkout-emergency letter.
- Ask who can place a $1 test order.
Questions you could ask
- Block checkout or shortcode?
- Which gateway (Stripe, PayPal, other)?
- Staging already exists?
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